Injury adds uncertainty for team

The Kansas City Star (03.25.2014)
Before | After
This story about one of the University of Kansas’ best basketball players required fact-checking of statistics and dates, careful handling of the complex subject matter of speculation and a tight headline in a one-column space on the sports section’s front page.

Additionally, I was able to save a screenshot of my edits (bottom right) to compare with the final version that appeared in print (bottom left).

"What-if factor looms" final (03.25.2014)

“What-if factor looms” final

"What-if factor looms" edits (03.25.2014)

“What-if factor looms” edits

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